looking for a second set of eyes.
Jun. 15th, 2017 02:53 pmI just finished my ![[profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
cross_genfic and I've struggled with the more intimate parts of the fic. I've written two versions of the sex bits, and I'm not at all sure which one is best. I'm looking for the one that will give the reader the most feels. After having written and read it so many times, I'm all out of feels. LOL.
Would someone be willing to read the two versions and just tell me which one they would prefer? No betaing would be involved, (unless you can't let a comma error pass you by without the need to correct it) and you don't even have to read the entire thing. Just this bit.
It would really help me out.
Oh, and in other news: Banners for![[community profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/community.png)
party_4_potterare being worked on, and should be revealed soon.
I'm rather excited about this!
cross_genfic and I've struggled with the more intimate parts of the fic. I've written two versions of the sex bits, and I'm not at all sure which one is best. I'm looking for the one that will give the reader the most feels. After having written and read it so many times, I'm all out of feels. LOL.Would someone be willing to read the two versions and just tell me which one they would prefer? No betaing would be involved, (unless you can't let a comma error pass you by without the need to correct it) and you don't even have to read the entire thing. Just this bit.
It would really help me out.
Oh, and in other news: Banners for
party_4_potterare being worked on, and should be revealed soon.I'm rather excited about this!
